Tuesday, August 2, 2016

Think like an apple  
Be graceful of the sun
See  the world as you grow
Hang freely in the air
Be ready for every season
Stand strong through the winter
Feel refreshed after the rain
Be happy as you leave  home
Fly through the sky as you fall
Keep your head up as you roll down
The hill through the the immense grass
Make friends on your journey down
And once you’re down provide for others.



       By Moises O.

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8 comments:

  1. ScriptedAugust 3, 2016 at 11:31 AM

    This poem is so cool. I really like the line fly through the sky as you fall.

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  2. Grover is my spirit animalAugust 3, 2016 at 11:31 AM

    I like this, it's really inspiring. Why did you choose an apple.

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  3. maneya readsAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    I really liked the last line of this poem

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  4. Amelia's Amazing BlogAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    I love the word choice in this! I would have made this in the shape of an apple, but I understand that it is hard. Why did you choose an apple as the subject?

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  5. Orion X NoiroAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    nice

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  6. Chase's BlogAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    I like the last few lines about the apple falling. Also, how you chose not to make in the shape of an apple and instead focus on the writing.

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  7. Andrew's blogAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    That's really inspirational! I enjoyed hearing Daryl read it to the class! I don't know if you need to fix it, but it was really good!

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  8. Rya's BlogAugust 3, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    I really like the idea of an apple It's very creative.

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